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September's Artwork of the Month was created by kay85!

There it is again.

Such nuisance it brings,
Showers of grief and pain,
Howls of tears it sings.

Go away, go far from me,
To the depths of the world retreat,
For I want nothing from thee,
You offer nothing but conceit.

The horror of heartache,
The pain of losing,
The promises you forsake,
Those wounds still ailing.

They say you are divine,
They say you are pure,
Yet you rob me of sunshine,
Of my world you made unsure.

For you are imminently dangerous,
My dreams menacingly shattered,
Not even a rose seems joyous,
Now even a laugh seems fractured.

Go away love, let me be,
For I would want nothing from thee,
Leave me alone, set me free,
Leave me whole and happy.

You came in my heart once,
Let it be the last,
Keep away, keep your distance,
Stay where you are –
~ Stay in the past.


kay85's Writing Portfolio:
::Intoxicating Insanity :: Writing Portfolio::

If you have never had the experience of a toxic relationship or a love that was more painful than joyous - consider yourself lucky. Kay's words certainly echoed much of the despair and thoughts I have felt in the past and reading this poem was very cathartic. It allowed me to look back on what once was and observe old wounds with Kay's own eyes. "Stay where you are, stay in the past" is what I choose to tell my memories of that relationship too, and I want to thank Kay for having so beautifully expressed her own emotions that I can mirror myself in.



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Congratulations, Kay!! ^^
 

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Oh wow.. thank you.. and thank you for your kind words Joan <3 that’s all a writer could ask for, for their work to touch someone in any way
 

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Oh this is so beautifully written, Thank you for writing this, kay85 and congratulations on winning this graphic

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Aww thank you i feel honoured <3
 

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your poetry is so beautiful. teach me your ways 😱😱
 

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As cliche as it might sound, if it’s from the heart, it will come across but lol what i usually do is say out loud as i type, to get the cadence right. If the cadence rolls of the tongue, you’ll enjoy it even more because it sounds nice
 

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It's beautiful. I love it!
 

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Congratulations dear.
 

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Thank you both!
 

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Congratulations Kay! Well deserved
 

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Aww.. thank you all
 

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This is so beautiful, thank you for writing it and letting us read! <3
 

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This sounds like it could be a beautiful song
 

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Oh wow such a beautiful poem....I loved it. Keep wroting and keep shining Kay!
 

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