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Ravenclaw
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"No, none of these is right." The woman impatiently tapped the rhinestone-studded toe of her shoe on the ground. "If you can't perfect these characters in the next twenty-four hours, our deal is off. Am I clear?"

"Yes, ma'am. Of course. All of the flaws in these characters will be ironed out by the time you return." Even as she submissively gazed down at the floor, Georgia nervously bit her lip. There was no way she could fix every one of the imperfect characters in a day. Not on her own, at least.


Task
Georgia needs your help. Since she can't correct all of the problems in just one day, it's up to you to step in and point out what's wrong.

This is a lock/unlock style contest. When a new character profile or RP sample is posted in this thread, you will have exactly twenty-four hours to submit your thoughts via owl. Your owl for any given round must include the following to be considered valid: the correct term for the problem presented in the post, and a suggestion to fix the problem (at least two sentences in length).


Rules
1. All HEX and RPC rules apply.
2. Users may enter each round, but they may not enter any given round more than once. Only the first submission will be counted.
3. Entries must include the correct term for the problem AND a two-sentence suggestion for fixing the problem.
4. This contest will run until January 15th.
5. Any questions may be owled to Breanna.


Prizes
1st: Irish Knot Charm
2nd: 35,000 Galleons
3rd: 25,000 Galleons
4th: 20,000 Galleons
5th: 20,000 Galleons
6th: 750 HP
7th: 500 HP
8th: 300 HP


[color=white]Edited by Cait
 

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- this round is over -

Edited by dragon_rider2637
 

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.Ooops wrong place


Edited by ThestyCauldron
 

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@dragon_rider2637
do you mean that we must rewrite the text? or we can make two suggestions in point form as to what we would add or change?
 

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dragon_rider2637
do you mean that we must rewrite the text? or we can make two suggestions in point form as to what we would add or change?


Just suggestions on what you would change. Rewriting the text is not necessary.
 

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Quote: Cait
Quote: Morgana Malipiero
dragon_rider2637
do you mean that we must rewrite the text? or we can make two suggestions in point form as to what we would add or change?


Just suggestions on what you would change. Rewriting the text is not necessary.


thanks Cait!
 

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- round two is over -

Edited by dragon_rider2637
 

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- this round is over -

Edited by dragon_rider2637
 

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is this the final round?
 

Pureblood
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is this the final round?

No, the first posts mentions at that the contest itself runs until the 15th. I would imagine there will be 1-2 more rounds after this.
 

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the rounds so far were 16 Dec, 29 Dec and now 10 Jan
I was thinking this might be the final round
I don't mind either way, just wanted to know.
 

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Oh, really? I've only participated in this round here.
 

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Oh, really? I've only participated in this round here.


yep, i did all 3 rounds so far
 

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Thank you for your participation! You have 24 hours to review the following ticket list. Feel free to owl me with any questions.

Answers:

Round 1 - Mary Sue / Gary Stu
Round 2 - Powerplay
Round 3 - Godmodding

Round 1:

1. ladydeseis
2. joan darc
3. lily
4. beccabear1992
5. yesachael
6. lauramarie
7. greenjelly
8. koumori72
9. effie319
10. barbara simcox
11. thestycauldron
12. ladyreesekightkens
13. lady_the_great
14. faithful puppy
15. gildaglen
16. aelwyn
17. morgana malipiero
18. lunatic12
19. kalyen
20. kasey
21. artemis eve
22. meganhilty

Round 2:

23. riverglen
24. meganhilty
25. faithful puppy
26. jamessiriusremus
27. morgana malipiero
28. lily
29. barbara simcox
30. darklorddaniel
31. thestycauldron
32. lunatic12
33. parasvati
34. yesachael
35. aelwyn
36. koumori72
37. lauramarie
38. sav black

Round 3:

39. yesachael
40. a very happy start
41. aelwyn
42. luvzdeidara
43. darklorddaniel
44. koumori72
45. lady_the_great
46. riverglen
47. parasvati
48. thestycauldron
49. k8ekt
50. ladyreesekightkens
51. morgana malipiero
52. faithful puppy
53. barbara simcox
54. lunastardust
55. songbirdscall
56. sav black
57. lily
58. meganhilty
59. purplemidnight beach
 

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These look good to me. Thank you for this learning experience.
 

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Looks good!
 

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Gryffindor
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List looks good to me.
 

Mixed Blood
Slytherin
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Looks good to me, just wish I hadn't missed the first round.
 

Mixed Blood
Hufflepuff
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😄Looks good!
 

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Mixed Blood
Slytherin
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Looks good to me 👍
 

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